Responding to a review of The Essentials of Trading from a book reader


Someone posted a new review of The Essentials of Trading on Amazon which has the title “Covers the bare bones. There’s no meat at all”. I actually know who it was, as the individual emailed me. This is the first negative review I’ve seen to-date. So far they have all been excellent, but when you have a book read by thousands of people it’s inevitable that there are going to be those who don’t like it for one reason or another. I accept that fact and the criticism.

That said, I do want to address the reader’s arguments as there are points where I believe the book has been unfairly criticized (and others where it’s reasonable). To that end, I am posting the review here (italics) with my counter points.

I purchased this book for the purpose of learning more about stock trading. While the author suggests that his text is just as applicable to stocks, his entire focus is on currency (forex) trading. He spends a great deal of the book explaining the software of his favorite forex game platform (which turns out to be irrelevant during the remainder of the text). I can only assume that Oanda subsidized his book. I would not have purchased this book had I known that.

To address the latter point about Oanda subsidizing the book, the reader clearly did not pay close attention. On page 11 there is a point where I specifically state that while I have long used their forex platform both personally and in my educational efforts, I have no beneficial relationship with them, nor have I ever had. Which isn’t to say I wouldn’t mind having one at some point. :-)

Moving back to the part about the focus being only on forex, this is something I’ve heard before, and I can understand why that might appear to be the case. Especially in the early part of the book where trading basics are the main focus, forex is the market featured. There’s a very simple and specific reason for that. Forex trades 24 hours a day.

I developed The Essentials of Trading based on my experience teaching trading in the college classroom. These were evening classes. The stock market was closed. The futures market – including stock index futures – is not sufficiently active many evenings to provide sufficient price movement for teaching purposes. It’s about giving people the opportunity to practice in a real-time, active price movement environment. The forex market is the best vehicle for that.

After getting the reader working on understanding price movements, orders, profit/loss, and all those basics, the focus shifts away from forex. The sections on what moves prices and market analysis are general. They incorporate all of the major markets in the discussion.

In terms of the forex platform being irrelevant during the remainder of the text, that is completely untrue since it most definitely features when I get into the system development and testing area. I did that to allow the reader to once again practice on a platform with which they were already familiar.

While I am glad to know a bit more about forex trading, some of the “logic” behind doing so is faulty in my opinion. One of the premises behind trading currency is the much smaller set of investment vehicles to analyze as opposed to the thousands of stocks available. The trouble with this premise is that one currency in and of itself takes an entire economy to create its value as opposed to a stock which is a microcosm of one sector of an economy. What you end up trading with forex is not just one economy but TWO! To trade the currencies effectively, one should know what’s driving the value of both entire economies. The scope of your fundamental analysis is therefore not more limited, but dynamically multiplied.

Cannot disagree with that at all. Fundamental analysis of the forex market is very complex because you are trading a relationship between two currencies. Of course technical analysis and quantitative analysis are also possible methods for forex trading.

However, that being said, this book only covers the most basic concepts of trading, and in very broad generalities. He gives practical “homework” assignments, such as track market reactions to economic releases, keep a journal, write down your goals, define your strategy, stick to your strategy, don’t drink and trade.

All true. This is a basic, foundational book. The don’t drink part, wasn’t mine, though. It was a quote from a trader on the Trade2Win forum.

Where this book falls grossly short, for me, is in the details of his “methods”. The subtitle is “From the Basics to Building a Winning Strategy”. This should be interpreted as reaching only to the upper resistance area of the Basics. The window left between the Basics and the theoretical Winning Strategy is quite large. There is NO bullish breakout into the Winning Strategy trading area.

Nice use of market related phraseology. :-)

I’m not entirely sure what was expected in terms of sharing my “methods”. If the reader went in to the book expecting that I was going to lay out a specific technique for trading the markets, they were well off base. The book is in no way intended to do that and I made very sure that it was not advertised by my publisher as doing anything of the sort (though it does present a pretty specific stock trading methodology in an appendix by way of a fully realized trading plan of action).

He basically says, “go create a strategy”, then “test your strategy”. Then says, “choose a strategy” without a single word of advice as to how to do that with any reasonable or practical sensibility. There is no discussion of the multitude of components that might make up a strategy other than “there’s other books written on the subject”. His homework assignment in this one area would leave the book on the shelf for years while you figure it all out yourself.

The three chapters which cover systems development, testing, and evaluation are intended to outline what a trading system is and how to judge one. Obviously, to develop and test a system one must first have something to be the basis for that system. Only the individual can decide what that basis is. The process of doing so is addressed in the middle part of the book where the discussion involves determining how one takes on the market. Which market? Which instrument(s)? What timeframe? Technical? Fundamental? Quantitative? Value or momentum? Trend or range? There are a lot of questions the individual needs to answer before the system comes in to play.

The reviewer uses the term “multitude of components”, and that is extremely appropriate. There are so many possibilities for ways to trade, what to trade, when to trade, and how to do it that no book could possibly cover even most of them in a reasonable fashion. My intention with The Essentials of Trading was to introduce the basic roots and categories, but it is up to the individual to pick the best for them and pursue more detailed research in that area.

He provides a few basic testing examples, but emphasizes that they were created for the purpose of walking through a fictitious test and are not intended to provide any usable results. There’s no list of things that might be testable, what indicators are available, or what variables to use, what formulas to use or how to apply any of his suggestions to the wide expanse of reality. Speaking of formulas, he throws out a great deal of quantitative results, but doesn’t provide the math used to back it up. This is akin to saying, “X=10, please go test for X, and make your choices based on the results.” I’m just supposed to grab these formulas out of thin air I suppose?

Without knowing specifically to what the reviewer is speaking, I can’t really address this critique. I didn’t include much in the way of complex math or quantitative methods, so I’m not really sure what the issue is here. 

The few formulas that he does provide are either basic math (sell price minus purchase price equals profit), or include variables that aren’t explained at all (i.e. R sub f = risk free rate of return). If you don’t know what Risk Free Rate of Return is, don’t worry neither do I and I’ve read the book.

The Risk Free Rate is generally considered the yield on US Treasury securities of the time span in question. That said, right after introducing it in the text as part of the formula for the Sharpe Ratio I tossed it out for the sake of simplicity since essentially it’s a meaningless thing for the trader. It’s never used again. 

He doesn’t point you in any direction whatsoever! There’s a big world out there, go invent your tests and your formulas yourself, then test all the possibilities before using real money to trade. While at the same time says that it’s unreasonable for a novice to understand more than one trend indicator at a time. I’m sorry, that’s just not practical advice. If I can only understand one indicator, at least point me in a somewhat limited direction and explain it to me.

The reviewer here seems to make the assumption that everyone who reads The Essentials of Trading is going to follow a path toward technical analysis. At least that’s the impression I get from the discussion of indicators. In writing the book, however, I did no such thing. I knew that some folks would go toward fundamentals, others technicals, and still others quantitative methods. There are excellent books on all those subjects. I couldn’t possibly go into any real depth in any of those subjects. The objective of the book was to introduce them so the reader could make her/his own decisions.

He also does not give any advice as to how to find a broker, just says “find one that suits your goals”. What?! Mind telling me how to do that? Never once mentions how to research their credentials, or what scams might await. How are they regulated (or not)? What should you look for as a reasonable spread? Are there hidden fees to consider? What about those bogus interest rate rules some brokers have? And absolutely nothing he suggested actually related to stocks or stock brokers at all as far as I’m concerned.

Actually, my advice in regards to brokers was to make use of sites like Trade2Win where there are extensive discussions of various brokers in all different markets. That said, the book probably could have done with a more thorough discussion of brokers. That’s definitely something I’ll have in mind for a future revised edition.

Many of his charts are illegible, or incomprehensible due to lack of explanation as to what he’s charted. There are many grammatical and sentence structure errors which make portions of this text difficult to get through. His overview of the technical indicators is slack at best. He merely suggests that “there are many books that already cover that topic in great detail”. In fact he makes similar statements on various topics throughout the book.

I will absolutely agree on the charts. When I originally put the book together I was doing so in a normal 8.5×11 page format. It wasn’t until Brett Steenbarger got me hooked up with Wiley that things changed. Personally, I don’t care much for the way Wiley formats its trading books. They are quite unattractive in layout.

As for the book’s overview of technicals being slack, of course it is. John Murphy’s book Technical Analysis of the Financial Markets is widely considered the best book on the subject. That book runs 500+ pages. There’s no way I could possibly cover a subject with that much depth in any but the most introductory way in a book which was developed to be basic and foundational.

The most amazing thing is that he spends the entirety of the book explaining trading via forex. But then the trading system he shares with you in the appendix is for stocks! And not only that, the system presented completely digresses from his proposal to pick one or two trading vehicles and thoroughly back test them to develop the optimum system for that vehicle. It is the ultimate in inconsistency! Due to the number of errors in the book, there’s no way I’d trust his “sample system” at the end of the book without confirming it against several other sources.

First off all, the reviewer suggests that there are a number of errors in the book, but hasn’t actually pointed them out. Not really sure what can be done with that.

Second, as noted earlier, I included the stock method as an example of a full formed trading plan and strategy. I really don’t know how that contradicts anything. As I’ve already said, I used forex a lot in the book for specific trading elements so they could be readily replicated and practiced. At no point, though, did I say not to trade stocks, or endorse any particular market. I don’t consider trading different individual stocks to violate the idea of focusing on relatively few vehicles, and the system I use is one I’ve tested considerably over the years.

And one should absolutely never trade a system without doing your own testing of it.

If you need someone to tell you that you need to do your homework, apply yourself to ongoing research, and plan properly prior to trading then I’ve just done that. No need to buy the book.

However, if you’re looking for practical advice on how to find workable tools, strategy evaluation methods, or any caveats to watch out for which are prevalent in the industry, I suggest that you seek to purchase one of those other books that he alluded to.

The subtitle really should be “From the Basics and up to (but not including) Building a Winning Strategy”.

My basic feeling from this review is that the reader:

1) Already has experience in and/or experience of the market. This is suggested by the phrase in their first sentense ”purpose of learning more about stock trading”. This book is not specfic to stock trading, so a reader who knows that’s what they want to trade should look for a book which covers that subject directly. The same is true of any other specific market or technique.

2) They were expecting something more from the book than it was designed to present. The talk about not being provided with a specific method or indicators indicates as much. As I’ve said, this book is foundational. It was not written to present the reader with anything like “use this system to make money”. I’ll let others sell that kind of book to folks who in most cases will never make any meaningful money using said system.

3) What I consider the most important part of the book was essentially skipped. The middle third of the book talks at length about what it takes to develop a strong trading base. This is by far the biggest problem I see with new or relatively new traders. They just jump into the deep end of the pool without learning how to do anything more than tread water. The reader makes absolutely no mention of the sections of the book on developing a strong trading plan or risk management. Everything else was attacked in one fashion or another. Why not those areas?

Like I said before, I accept that not everyone is going to find the book useful. It wasn’t written for everyone. I also agree that there are things which could have been done better. If I were writing it now I would change some things based on the experience I’ve gained working with traders over the last three years since I wrote the book.

They wouldn’t be huge changes, though. I continue to believe that The Essentials of Trading does what I intended it to do, and does it pretty well. The fact that so many folks have had such good things to say about it tells me the vast majority of readers find it very useful.


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John Forman, author of this blog, has traded for more than 20 years, is a professional market analyst, and authored The Essentials of Trading. He is an active participant in trading forums, consults for trading related businesses, as published literally dozens of trading articles, and has been quoted in a number of books and in the media.
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  • http://tradingbots.blogspot.com/ Tyro

    Wow, what a lot of attention given to a negative review. I feel like going to amazon and trashing your book just to get the attention. Start off with an attention grabber: “John clearly got the essentials of trading by strangling the life out of trading and selling the unidentifiable, mangled remains to a gullible public,” and then moving on to critique the way you dress, spell and eat soup. Rebut that, Mr Book Man!

    Seriously, I wonder whether this is giving more attention to negative reviews than they’re worth. Everyone is bound to have some detractors and and I think people understand that negative reviews happen to the best of books. In fact, if you’ve only got one negative review, perhaps you weren’t trying hard enough :)

    But even though you’re focusing on negatives, I like the way you explain your philosophy and book’s attributes. I haven’t read it yet, but it sounds intriguing.

  • http://www.theessentialsoftrading.com John

    “John clearly got the essentials of trading by strangling the life out of trading and selling the unidentifiable, mangled remains to a gullible public, and then moving on to critique the way you dress, spell and eat soup. Rebut that, Mr Book Man!”

    I can’t. It’s completely true. :-)

    “In fact, if you’ve only got one negative review, perhaps you weren’t trying hard enough”

    I have a whole different book project in mind that will definitely go in a MUCH more controversial direction. If that one doesn’t create a dramatic reaction then I’ve definitely messed up on getting the word out!

    “But even though you’re focusing on negatives, I like the way you explain your philosophy and book’s attributes.”

    Thanks. That was exactly why I did this post.

  • Katherine

    I wrote the review, and for your clarification, this was my comment regarding the “middle third” of your book:

    “He provides a few basic testing examples, but emphasizes that they were created for the purpose of walking through a fictitious test and are not intended to provide any usable results. There’s no list of things that might be testable, what indicators are available, or what variables to use, what formulas to use or how to apply any of his suggestions to the wide expanse of reality. Speaking of formulas, he throws out a great deal of quantitative results, but doesn’t provide the math used to back it up. This is akin to saying, “X=10, please go test for X, and make your choices based on the results.” I’m just supposed to grab these formulas out of thin air I suppose?”

    Giving bogus testing examples without adequate explanation is not “teaching”. I don’t know about you, but I never learned much from show-n-tell. An no, I’m not an experienced trader, although I have had a 401K and a Roth for 10 or 15 years. So, yes I’ve bought and sold mutual funds and stocks before based on generic portfolio allocation recommendations of middle of the road analysts. However, I wouldn’t say that means I know how to trade.

    I’m sorry if you thought my review was an attack. For me, it was a warning to other people like me who want more direction than what you provided in your text.

  • http://www.theessentialsoftrading.com John

    Katherine,

    If you feel the review was simply a warning for others like yourself and not an attack, maybe you should reread it. I’m certainly not the only person who took it as an attack – and justifiably so. You didn’t give the reader very much about yourself upon which to compare themselves to know if they are like you or not so basically it just comes off as being a rant.

    Things like “bogus testing examples” are essentially accusations of fraud and deception. How can that not be considered an attack?

    Moreover, it’s an entirely baseless one. They are most definitely not made up results. I provided exact system specifications, explanations of the indicators used, the markets being tested upon, and the methods I used for testing. Anyone with the desire to do so would be able to replicate the results. I picked the things to be tested based on the indicators available on the Oanda system (which I listed out) so readers could test the systems themselves (manually, at least) using the platform on which they had been practicing their trading from the start of the book.

    I’m still waiting for something specific about what quantitative results were just thrown out and not explained.

    And the crack about not learning from show-and-tell? What’s that all about? That’s exactly how you’ve been learning things all your life. A book shows you something and tells you about it . Your teachers show you something and tell you about it. The difference here is that in my book the very specific instruction, repeated a great many times, is to take what’s been shown and told and to go practice with it to reinforce the lessons.

    If, as you say, you’ve been placing stock trades for 10-15 years then you have some experience trading. That means clearly the first part of the book which introduces the basic elements of prices, transactions, etc. would be something you could skip over.

    Did you actually take the time, however, to do what the Trading Plan section says? Did you sort out what you – Katherine – need to be doing? Or did you just read right straight through, expecting the book to provide you the exact trading method you should use to make money in the market?

    Being completely honest, your review comes off as sounding like it’s from someone who wants something handed to them, not from someone with the realization that it’s not that simple and that some work is required. You criticized the subtitle of the book, but to me it’s spot on. The word “building” is the key. The goal of the book isn’t to give you a winning strategy, it is to help you build one based the decisions you make in terms of the elements of your overall trading plan. I cannot build it for you. No one can. You have to build it yourself.

  • Katherine

    Actually, the best teachers I’ve had in my life, which admittedly have been few, explained the details behind reasoning rather than having me regurgitate whatever data they “show me”. I literally slept through most of college, and did quite well. So, perhaps that explains most of my discontent with the material.

    Perhaps my word “bogus” was a poor word choice, but what I expected was to have reasoning patterns explained. Smart choices vs. bad choices. Bogus in the context I meant to use it means, “useless”. I do not want anyone to give me anything on a silver platter. But in order to create a strategy one has to know reasoning behind good and bad choices. This is where I look to professionals to provide their experiential insight. What is a reasonable starting place for me the trading beginner?

    Honestly I’ve read Poker books that explain bankroll management better both in theory and practice. Statistical evidence is given for the probability of ruin at any given blind. Charts extrapolate the formulas into required bankrolls for expected win% and loss probabilities. Based solely on their recommendations I’ve done very well at .05/.10 blinds. But to get into real poker, you have to have a huge bankroll, which I don’t have.

    To contrast, your discussion of risk management only provides the most basic of thoughts. True, many novices may not consider this aspect prior to trading at all. But your discussion does nothing to enhance their ability to “reason out” a realistic risk strategy based on expected win%. What kind of bankroll do you need to even make trading remotely worth the effort involved? Only a hobbyist would be remotely satisfied with earnings from a $100 initial investment. So, what are we really talking about as far as capital requirements in terms of making “realistic” gains for a novice? $100K? $200K? Expecting me to define it for myself based on my own net worth is foolhardy, in my opinion.

    Perhaps it is that you feel you’ve given enough information for me to be able to reverse engineer these parameters. And, I might accept that point as I’ve not yet laid out everything you said into a spreadsheet and devised all of the formulas myself. But, as far as spoon feeding, yes it would be nice to have some applicable math and/or formulas to put in my toolbox or directly into my spreadsheet, provided that it is also explained as to why it is applicable.

    If you require professional proofreading of your entire book, you should pay someone to do so. I have neither the time nor the inclination to go through and point out everything that I considered to be ill-explained or grammatically incorrect. And I did point out several examples in my private email to you already.

    Basically, what happened to me was that in the process of reading your book, one ambiguity piled up on another and I became both frustrated and angry at not having the information required to make logical informed decisions. By the time I wrote you my first email I was already past my breaking point, but had not yet finished the book.

    Your book does not provide a starting place for entry into trading, it provides theories without evidence of “practical” application, and absolutely no practical well educated direction. Do you seriously think it’s a practical choice for a novice to determine he/she has a high-risk trading tolerance? What about the overly conservative, are they really going to get anywhere? I think not. Therefore, it would stand to reason that you could have made some relatively reasonable recommendations and helped us all to approach a “sane” initial starting point.

    But, you didn’t. The necessity, therefore, is to move on to other resources for the bulk of the decision making processes. What I was looking for was direction, not pre-formulated “directions”.

  • http://www.theessentialsoftrading.com John

    Katherine,

    To address one specific detail quickly, the book most definitely was professionally edited by someone assigned by my publisher (Wiley). Maybe I got a poor one. I wasn’t provided credentials.

    As for the rest, I don’t have time to respond right now. When I do I will respond.

  • Katherine

    PS – BTW, went to amazon to correct my use of the word “bogus”. Turns out, I didn’t say “bogus testing examples”. I said “basic testing examples”. My only use of the word “bogus” in the entire review was in regards to Forex Broker interest rates. The reference is to those brokers who charge negative interest on all currency trades, long or short for any pair, which was discovered during my own independent broker research.

  • http://www.theessentialsoftrading.com John

    Katherine,

    You used “bogus” in your comment above. I never implied it was part of your original review.

    As for the brokers, I can’t necessarily disagree with your use of the term in that case. :-)